But I do have a short flash story to show you all. Hope you like it!
The Servant
Esmerelda stood impatiently. She would
be shunned for this, thrown out of the Castle by her parents, if they
knew what she was doing...who she was doing. A slight noise down the
hall made her jump. Was this her lover? Or was she to be caught,
loitering in the servants passages. Footsteps... a door opening...
more footsteps. As she tried to keep herself hidden in a doorway, a
hand reached round the corner. The love of her life had came, as
promised.
'I thought you weren't going to show'
'I wouldn't miss the chance to hold you
my love. Quick, this way'.
The pair headed off through a door to
the right, it lead to the servants quarters. To the left was her
lovers bedroom, the room they were about to make love in. Esmeralda
ducked through the doorway to the bedroom, and quickly dis-robed
herself. She stood in front of her lover, naked, and in desperate
need of touch.
'You look so beautiful Esmerelda,
seeing you has been the only thing that has kept me going all day'.
And with that statement, Es reached up
and gently slid her lovers top off, unclasped her bra, and very
sweetly began to caress her breasts. This was the night she had been
waiting for, Rachel was the love of her life, she was sure of it.
What did you think? Let me know :)
ohhh I can picture this ..... you could extend it ... *hint*
ReplyDeleteI had been thinking the same thing Raven ;)
DeleteLoved this, Dee. And I agree, it is just begging for a full story!
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you doris :) x
DeleteThis would make a great full story! Please, please do it :) xx
ReplyDeleteHee hee thanks stace, think I may just do it :) xx
ReplyDeleteThis is really good Dee! I like the twist that the lover ends up being a woman. I agree with everyone else--write more cause I wanna read it! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you megsn :) ok ok I am going to write this out a bit and see where it takes me :)
DeleteAwesome well done
ReplyDelete:D thank you!
DeleteGood job. Keep on going!
ReplyDeleteXoXo
London
Thank you LSJ! X
DeleteKeep us updated with your progress!
ReplyDeleteSarah x
I will sarah thank you! X
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