Saturday, 6 April 2013

A short 'Flash' for you all

Dont' worry, you can uncover your eyes, I'm not going to flash myself at you! ;p

But I do have a short flash story to show you all. Hope you like it!

The Servant

Esmerelda stood impatiently. She would be shunned for this, thrown out of the Castle by her parents, if they knew what she was doing...who she was doing. A slight noise down the hall made her jump. Was this her lover? Or was she to be caught, loitering in the servants passages. Footsteps... a door opening... more footsteps. As she tried to keep herself hidden in a doorway, a hand reached round the corner. The love of her life had came, as promised.

'I thought you weren't going to show'

'I wouldn't miss the chance to hold you my love. Quick, this way'.

The pair headed off through a door to the right, it lead to the servants quarters. To the left was her lovers bedroom, the room they were about to make love in. Esmeralda ducked through the doorway to the bedroom, and quickly dis-robed herself. She stood in front of her lover, naked, and in desperate need of touch.

'You look so beautiful Esmerelda, seeing you has been the only thing that has kept me going all day'.

And with that statement, Es reached up and gently slid her lovers top off, unclasped her bra, and very sweetly began to caress her breasts. This was the night she had been waiting for, Rachel was the love of her life, she was sure of it.

What did you think? Let me know :)


  1. ohhh I can picture this ..... you could extend it ... *hint*

    1. I had been thinking the same thing Raven ;)

  2. Loved this, Dee. And I agree, it is just begging for a full story!

  3. This would make a great full story! Please, please do it :) xx

  4. Hee hee thanks stace, think I may just do it :) xx

  5. This is really good Dee! I like the twist that the lover ends up being a woman. I agree with everyone else--write more cause I wanna read it! :-)

    1. Thank you megsn :) ok ok I am going to write this out a bit and see where it takes me :)

  6. Awesome well done

  7. Good job. Keep on going!


  8. Keep us updated with your progress!
    Sarah x


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